All of the children were heard sobbing. They had all become
attached to the elderly storyteller. He had done so much for them.
"All right, all right, guys," said the young girl. "I am sad too,
but he was sick before we came here and you know what he told me?"
At this, all of the children's ears pricked up.
"He told me one last story to share with you guys, so drink up your
cocoa and listen." By this time the young girl had the children
and the adults' attention. The adults sent afloat the funeral
pyre for the elderly man and awaited the archer with the flaming arrow.
The young girl began the tale.

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Yaitowi, in his time, walked
with God during the time that the waters rose and rose till they
covered almost the entire earth. Yaitowi was protected by God
during this time, but the all other creatures on the earth, from sky,
earth and beneath the waters, were devastated and finally destroyed.
See, the land was flooded already on the seventh day of February and
ten days later, it rained continuously for fourteen days and
nights.
At the end of that time, there were around forty survivors that were
situated at the top of various mountain tops.
The archer aimed and shot
his arrow, immediately catching our elderly storytellers' pyre on
fire.
One of the children chose this opportunity to speak up, "so, it sounds
like they didn't have as many survivors as we do."
The young girl nodded and continued.
After these survivors had prepared themselves for lives on top of these
mountains, they heard the voice of God declare that since man is made
in the image of God, He would not attempt to flood the earth
again in an attempt to destroy man-kind.
Finally, God declared that the rainbow would be his sign for centuries
to come that God would not try to destroy mankind in a flood again.
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One of the adults asked, "Did these
people adopt this from Noah's Ark?"
The young girl replied quietly, "I don't know, he didn't say."
One of the younger boys spoke up, "You should have heard the other
stories, they all had something in common the whole time."
The
elderly man had a friend that had helped him to the mountain.
That friend had a few things to say about our elderly
storyteller. Everyone sat and listened. It was time,
however, to return to life and survival on the mountain top.
Author's
Note: The telling of this story on the Author's
Den site is very condensed and the Sacred Text version is a bit more
elaborate. I clearly chose a condensed version of the already
condensed version offered on the Author's Den site. I did this
because a young girl is retelling it as opposed to the elderly man and
it is a quick eulogy because the business of the camp demands a lot of
time and while it is important to celebrate the life of the recently
deceased, there is much work to do. The whole idea of this flood
is somewhat impractical and I am not a scientist, so I looked at some
figures that describe annual (typical) evaporation rates and then I
tried to factor in recession of water back to its normal sources.
My goal was to give the reader a sense of how long these people were
going to be stuck on the mountain tops and I didn't want them stuck on
the mountains for 3,000 something years. I don't know how
significant it was to add that information into the introduction of the
frame tale. I just wanted to end it with some sort of resolution.