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Introduction

Paradise It's a Persian word originating from the word "garden" that has made its way into English translation from the Greek.  In the English vocabulary, the word "paradise" has  come to describe a utopia--that perfect, ideal place--relaxed and pleasant.  It's a land of dreams; a land where society, politics, nature, and social mores are in perfect accord and people live in complete harmony--with the universe and with one another
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Finding such a place is so near the heart of every individual that stories abound.  "The Garden of Eden," "Atlantis, " "Shangri-La," "Cockaigne," "Arcadia," "Xanadu," "Avalon," and "El Dorado" are just a few of the most widely known myths that have circulated through history.  Over and over, the theme is redeveloped, but the core tenets remain unchanged.  The place is often isolated, yet it possesses an abundance of shelter, food, and water.  And more interesting, in many of the stories the water source has four branches.  In Eden it is four rivers that meet, in another it is a simple fountain that opens into four directions.  "Paradise" is also guarded and protected--sometimes by spiritual beings and sometimes by natural forces such as a vast range of mountains or body of water.  The inhabitants live long, healthy lives.  Some are immortal.  They live with nature in a magnificent homeostasis so that death is unknown.  Outsiders are received cautiously and with reservation.  Any attempt to upset the utopic balance and present order is cause for immediate alarm and possible expulsion.

Out of the many utopian possibilities, I have chosen to work with these four:  The Garden of  Eden, Atlantis, Shangri-La, and El-Dorado
Not a lot of information is available on any of these subjects.  Most of the descriptions in my stories are based purely on my personal beliefs which I have blended with traditional legends.  In my story of the Garden of Eden, I do not re-tell of Adam and Eve.  I expand on the description from the Bible and the apocryphal text, Book of Jubilees.  The information I used in the story of Atlantis came mostly from the ancient text "Critias" by Plato.  I did, however, add in many futuristic technology aspects.  Although the exact location of Shangri-La is unknown, many legends point to the Himalayan Mountains.  So, my story takes place around Mount Everest.  El-Dorado is the mythical city of gold from Latin America.

My story takes place in an a small one-room rural schoolhouse located in the late 1950's.  The story begins on a beautiful spring morning.  Four brothers- Alex, age 13; Ty, age 10; Trey, age 8; and Andy, age 6- have just arrived at school and are settling in their desks to begin the day.  But because of the wonderful weather the boys are restless.  They would rather be outside than listening to their teacher's daily lessons. 
As the day wears on and the various lessons are completed, each boy's mind begins to wander and is filled with a vision of a better place.  These visions do not happen at the sa me time, nor are the visions of the same place.  Alex has just turned thirteen and believes he knows everything.  This "know-it-all"  attitude is quickly transformed when he enters the serene Garden of Eden.  Ty, a gentle, quiet nine-year-old, becomes an albatross and travels the ocean winds to the mythical island of Atlantis.  Trey, a very active seven-year-old, climbs Mount Everest to discover the hidden city of Shangri-La.  Finally, young six-year-old Andy explores the golden city of El-Dorado.

As you read their stories, try to picture the  "paradise" each has envisioned.   Do you see the similarities?

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