Rama's Crib

Forest bungalow

Announcer: On this exciting episode of InTV Cribs...(clips play of Rama, Sita and Lakshmana in front of their house, and also of them walking and laughing by the river) we will take a once-in-a-lifetime tour of Rama's house in Panchavati.  Don't miss it, coming up NEXT!

(Music of lutes and drums plays, while "Cribs" flashes on the screen, and opening credits roll.  The show begins by showing the house, which is raised up off the ground by thick stilts.  We ascend the short ladder, and see Rama and Sita welcoming us to come through the front door of their home.  They are smiling, and Rama's arm is tight around Sita's waist.  Rama is wearing his bark clothing and Sita is wearing some of the nicer clothes and jewelry she was given by Anasuya.)

Rama:  Hello!  Welcome, everyone!  We are honored that you came to visit us here.  (He smiles at Sita.)

Sita: Welcome, friends.

Rama: There is a lot to show you here at Panchavati.  Let's start with the house, so come in please.

(The camera moves in through the door.  It is still fairly light inside the house because there are many windows.  The house is made of bamboo woven together, and the floors are grass.  It is very clean-looking and spacious inside with no clutter or much of anything. Lakshmana greets us inside also wearing bark garnments, with his bow slung over his shoulder.)

Lakshmana:  Hello all, nice to have you.  This is one of the houses I have built while we have been in exile here in the forest, so I will tell you a bit about it before you look around.  It took me only a day to build.  That's because I've built a few now since we are nearing the end of our fourteen years in the forest!  I think this is the strongest house we've lived in, and when the rains come I don't think they will find a way in through all the leaves I used for the roof.

Rama:  We love it here.  My brother did a wonderful job with the construction of our forest bungalow.

Sita:  It's very nice.  We are so lucky to have talented Lakshmana.

Rama:  Well as you can see, we have many rooms, but as residents of the forest, we keep very few material objects.  Come, I'm sure you want to see a few more rooms.

(The camera follows Rama through some mostly bright but empty rooms, and into the back of the house.  We come upon a bedroom with only a plain white bed and a small table.  On the table are more of Sita's treasures--lotions and jewels, given to her by people they met along the way.)

Rama:  This is our bedroom.  It's not much, but it's all we need.

Sita:  I love it, because I have my Rama. (She looks at him adoringly.)

Rama:  Why don't we show you where we spend most of our days?  It's beautiful outside.

(The camera moves from the bedroom, back toward the front of the house.  We follow Rama and Sita, who walk hand-in-hand down to the edge of the river.  The sun is shining and everything is a beautiful bright green.  Flowers are blooming at the river bank.  The trees rustle in the gentle breeze.)

Rama:  Sita and I come here almost every day.  We bathe in the river, and then relax and enjoy all the beauty of the river and animals, and of course we just enjoy each other. Lakshmana looks out for us, and keeps trouble from coming our way.

Lakshmana:  There have been some strange people lurking around Dandaka forest lately.  I just want to make sure they stay far away from the house, as well as Rama and Sita.

Sita:  Yes, the animals have been acting a little strange I've noticed. (she addresses Rama) We should show them the cave, too!

(Rama nods yes, and the camera cuts to more scenes of the beautiful forest, then to a scene of the three walking down by the riverbank.  A small cave in the side of a hill becomes visible.  The scene cuts to the dim inside.  We see the three of them standing and they are surrounded by mossy walls and a dirt floor.)

Rama: We love it in here, especially on warmer days.  It stays very cool in here.

Sita:  Sometimes we just lie on the cool earth in here and talk for the whole day.

(They all begin to talk and laugh, then the scene cuts to the three of them standing at the foot of the ladder to their forest bungalow, where it is bright again.)

Rama:  Well, thanks for coming and we hope you enjoyed seeing where we live.  Come back soon!

All: Goodbye!

(The camera backs away from the house and the scene is sped up with effects.  Music plays again as a few of the scenes from their house flash by to the beat of the music. The credits begin to roll.)

Announcer:  Next time, on InTV Cribs, we'll see homes from the Mahabharata.  So stay tuned!



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Story 1: Ravana's Crib
Story 3: The Pandavas' Crib

Author's note:
I wanted to make sure the personalities of each of the characters showed through during the tour.  I hoped to portray them all as very welcoming, and glad to have visitors.  I wanted Rama to be especially accommodating, and to be the star of the show.  I wanted Sita to be a bit reserved compared to the others, but while still seeming very happy there in the forest.  I made sure to include Lakshmana wearing his bow, because of his protective nature.  I also hoped that the references to Sita and Rama looking and smiling at each other make the reader recognize how much they are in love.  It is a very important part of this story because even though my storybook is about homes, I feel that the way a person acts when guests are around says a lot about their character.
This story was a little harder to write than Ravana's, because in the book, it only talks about this house for a page or two.  I combined descriptions of other forest homes they lived in with this one, and added some of my own ideas.  Most of what I had to work with was that it was, "Built on pillars," and had "bamboo," "grass floor," and a "leaf roof."  I hope it was clear that although they had few possessions, they were very happy there together.

Bibliography: 

Buck, W. (1976).
Ramayana: King Rama's Way. Berkeley: University of California Press.
Narayan, R. K. (1972). The Ramayana: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic. London: Penguin Classics.

Image:  Bungalow in Bali, Indonesia. Agung Raka

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