The wife of a rich man knew she was going to die, so she called her
only daughter to the bedside and said, "Dear child, be a good girl. God
will always protect you." Then she closed her eyes and departed.
The rich man got married with another women three years later. The rich
man's new wife had two daughters who were fair of face but black of
heart. The women and her daughters were all jealous of the beauty of
the rich man's daughter. They treated her as a maid and took
away all her pretty clothes and put an old grey bedgown and wooden
shoes on her. They made her do all the housework from morning till
night. Sometimes, her sister even mocked her by emptying her peas and
lentils into the ashes, so she was forced to sit and pick them out
again. She could only sleep by the fireside in the ashes after work, so
she always looked dusty and dirty. People called her "Cinderella."
One day, before going on a trip, the father asked his daughters what he
should bring back for
them. His two step-daughters wanted beautiful
dresses and jewelry. However, Cinderella just wanted the first branch
which knocked against his hat on his way home. So the father brought
back the things that his daughters wanted after the trip. After
Cinderella got the branch, she went to her mother's grave and planted
the branch on it. She watered the branch with her tears because she
cried so much. The branch grew into a very big tree immediately.
Therefore, Cinderella came and sat beneath the tree and cried and
prayed every day. A little bird always came and threw down what
Cinderella wished to have.
One day, the King decided to throw a party for his son. He invited all
the girls in the country and hoped his son could choose himself a
bride. Cinderella's two sisters were so happy with the party. They
bought very beautiful dresses and much jewelry. They made Cinderella
comb their hair and iron their dresses. After Cinderella finished
helping her sisters, she begged her step-mother to let her go with
them. Her step- mother said, "You are dusty and dirty. Also, you don't
have clothes and shoes. No one will want to dance with you. You will
bring shame on us. You just stay here and wash all the dishes." Then
they left the house.
Cinderella was very sad and she went to sit under the tree and cried
again. She prayed to have a beautiful dress and shoes. The bird threw a
golden dress and a glass high-heeled shoes down to her.
After she cleaned off the dust and dirt, Cinderella put on the golden
dress
and the glass shoes went to the party. Her step-mother and
step-sisters did not recognize her because she was very pretty.
Cinderella caught the prince's attention after she arrived. The
prince asked Cinderella to be his partner and danced with her the whole
night without dancing with any other girls. When midnight came,
Cinderella wanted to leave because she needed to go back home
before her step-mother and step-sisters went home. She told the prince
that she needed to leave and then she ran away. She left one of her
glass shoes on the long stair outside the party room. The prince wanted
to
know her name so he ran after her. However, he only saw the glass heel
that she left on the stare when he came out from the party room.
The prince liked Cinderella very much and decided to take her as his
wife so he took the high heel to find her the day after the party. The
prince came to the house of Cinderella. Two of her sisters tried on the
high-heeled shoe. However, both of their feet did not fit the
shoe. The
prince asked Cinderella's step-mother if she had another daughter. The
step-mother said, "I do have another daughter, but she is very
dirty.She must not
be the one that you are looking for." The prince insisted on it. The
step-mother asked Cinderella to come out and try on the shoes.
Cinderella put her feet into the shoes, which fitted her perfectly. The
prince looked at her face and recognized her and cried, "This is the
true bride." The step-mother and the step-sisters were terrified.
The prince asked Cinderella to leave with him. They lived happily
together in the palace.
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I chose to include this story in my story book because it is one of my
favorite stories when I was a kid. I wanted to make my own version of
"Cinderella," so I can put all the details that I liked from different
versions into a new story.
I kept my story similar to the original and omitted and changed some of
the details. I omitted the part of the step-mother making
Cinderella pick up the lentils from the ashes three different times.
Also, I want my story to be a kids' story and I think there are two
parts from the original stories that are too violent
for children. So I omitted the part of the two step-sisters cutting out
the part of their feet to fit into the shoes. I also omitted how the
eyes of both step-sisters were poked out by the pigeons as the
punishment of
their wickedness and falsehood. I changed the party from three times to
one time and used the glass high-heeled shoe as the thing for the
prince to find
Cinderella out because I think it is my favorite part.
Title: Cinderella
Authors: Grimm, Jacob and Wilhelm
Book and Year: Household Tales(1884)
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