
Peter: Children, we will be approaching the
lagoon very
soon. Be sure to watch your step, and don't fall into the water. You
will see a
giant rock, known as Marooners Rock, and that's where we will land.
Wendy has
taken the liberty to make you all pillows to sit on, so just grab a
seat
and my
mermaid friend, Flora, will begin her tale. Here we are! Hello there,
Flora!
Flora: Hi Peter! I am very pleased to meet all of you. Forgive me for
not
joining you on the rock, but I must stay in the water. At this very
spot you
are sitting, an almost tragic adventure took place. It was a normal
summer day;
my fellow mermaids and I were playing our usual game of bubbleball. The
Lost
Boys were taking their mid-day nap, and Wendy was watching over them
while
stitching. All of a sudden, a shudder shot through the lagoon, warning
us of
approaching troubles. The water went cold, and the sky turned black.
Peter
could smell danger from miles away. He sprang up and, waking the
others, he cried
“Pirates!" They all waited for their leader's order, and in an instant
disappeared into the dark water.
Peter: I'm always ready for an adventure, Flora. It’s my instinct I
tell you!
Flora: Oh, Peter, you’re very brave. Well - right after they all dove
into the water,
a small
boat drew near. There was one person who didn't belong,
however. It was
the Piccaninny princess, Tiger Lily. The pirates had taken her captive,
because
they caught her sneaking on to their ship. Their
captain, James Hook, had ordered the two
pirates to take her to Marooners Rock, and leave her there to drown in
the rising
tide! Peter and Wendy were floating in the water nearby. Wendy cried
for poor
Tiger Lily, while Peter quietly devised a plan to save her. He couldn’t
resist
the urge to mess with the rotten pirates. He began to imitate Hook’s
voice, and
ordered the two pirates to set Tiger Lily free. They immediately became
confused, but they had taken the bait, and believed that it was Hook
who had spoken. They hesitated at first,
but they knew it was
best not to defy their captain’s orders. They cut the bonds around the
princess’s
hands and feet, and let her go in the water. Wendy knew Peter wouldn’t
be able
to resist revealing to the pirates that he had tricked them. She
quickly
clasped a hand over his mouth, but Hook’s voice still rang out, “Boat
ahoy!” This
time it was not Peter, however, but the nasty pirate captain himself. Hook swam up to the boat, and then climbed
in.
Peter: He had ruined my tricky plan, but I
wasn’t done
messing with them, yet!
Flora: That’s what got you in big trouble, Peter! Anyways - the three pirates began to discuss about the Lost Boys finding a mother. That’s when Hook realized Tiger Lily was missing. He grew infuriated when the two pirates told him that he himself had ordered them to free her. Hook had done no such thing, and he instantly knew that something wasn’t right. Peter really couldn’t resist this time, and he shouted out in Hook’s voice. The pirates grew puzzled again, and after trying to figure out who was messing with them, Peter revealed himself! Instantaneously, a fight broke out between all the boys and the three pirates. Punches were being thrown left and right, and blood was drawn on both sides. The boys were clever, though, to leave Hook to their leader, Peter Pan. The battle began between Peter and Hook on this very rock. It was a short and sharp fight, but more than anything, it was unfair. Hook broke the rules of good form when he bit poor Peter, after Peter tried to help him up the rock. Traumatized by Hook’s action, Peter froze at the unfairness of the situation. Hook took this opportunity to viciously claw Peter, and then the pirates fled the scene. The Lost Boys began looking for Peter and Wendy, who had been hiding in the dark water, but failed to find them. Thinking they had gone back home, the Lost Boys also left. A dark silence grew over the lagoon, as Peter and Wendy were left for dead. Peter was too injured to move, and knew that soon the rising water would devour them both. A kite, that Wendy's brother Michael had made a few days before, came into Peter’s view. He figured if the kite could raise Michael, why not Wendy? He tied it around her waist, as she pleaded and argued that she couldn’t leave him there. The water had risen dangerously high now, and Peter knew he had no choice. With a push, Wendy rose into the air and out of sight. Poor Peter was left to perish, as the mermaids and I began to wail at the moon.
Peter: That moment was terribly scary! I remember that a quiver sent chills through my body, and then adrenaline kicked in. With a smile on my face, I jumped straight up on the rock. I knew that death would be an enormously grand adventure for me!
Flora: It was dreadful for all of us, Peter, but what happened next was a miracle! As the tide rose higher, Peter took in his final moments, and then noticed a peculiar white object in the water. It was the Never Bird, who had come determined to save him. She urged him to climb into her nest, and after careful thought, he quickly created the bird's nest into a small raft, and floated to safety. Peter would live to tell his grand adventure!
Peter: Yes, I did, and I’ll never forget it!
Thank you,
Flora, for that wonderful account. I am so happy I was able to share
all of these wonderful adventures with all of you.

Author’s Note: This adventure was
extremely important in the
original book, because out of all the adventures he could tell, this is
the adventure that Barrie/narrator
chooses
to tell
his audience. I thought it was a good ending note, as well. It is also
important because Peter Pan almost loses his
life! This
story is very suspenseful, and emotional. A lot happens in a short
amount of time,
and I did my best to recount the most important details. I couldn’t add
a lot
of the dialogue between the pirates, as well as between Peter and
Wendy, but I tried
to explain the situations that were being discussed. Also, in the
original, the
mermaids are mean and not very fond of Wendy. I didn’t portray that in
my
retelling, though, because I imagine mermaids to be nice. I also
introduced
Tiger Lily, because she was the reason why this whole crazy situation
started
in the first place. The two pirates who captivated her were Smee and
Starkey. Hook played
a major
part as well, so I had to introduce him in this story. I also would
have liked to add a little more
about
the Never Bird, but I would have passed the maximum words. If you get a
chance,
you should read, in much more detail, how Peter was saved by her.
It’s
a peculiar event that occurs. I
definitely suggest reading the original story, because it is a great
chapter in
the book. For those
of you wondering what happened to Hook, he gets eaten by the crocodile!
So, Hook gets what he deserves!
Bibliography
Story: The Mermaids' Lagoon
Author: J.M. Barrie
Book: The Adventures of Peter Pan
Year Published: 1911
Web Source: The
Online Literature
Library