Manicures for Snow-White and Red-Rose
by Megan Pockrus

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White Roses and Red Roses

    It was a slow day in the salon, and all of the stylists were bored. 

"We sure have had some interesting characters come in the last couple of days!" said Kathy.
"I couldn't have said it better myself," Sheridan responded.
"Yeah, who would've thought two princesses in two days?" said Heather.

Then, two young women entered the salon.  Both of them were beautiful.  One of them had beautiful ivory skin, red lips and dark hair.  The other had ivory skin, rose-colored lips, and light hair.  Kathy approached them and asked them what she could help them with. 

"Well," said the dark-headed woman, "We've done hard cleaning for our mother for years.  We've decided that it's time for our nails to get manicures, and our husbands told us to go out and do just that."

"I believe you've heard right," Kathy said with a smile on her face.  She asked the two young women their names and they told her Snow White and Red Rose.  Kathy put the two women on the schedule book and asked them to hold on for a minute.  She walked over to two manicurists and they returned to the front with her.  The manicurists introduced themselves as Jessica and Lora and told the women to follow them.  They did.  The manicurists sat at manicure tables that were side by side.  They started on their nails and then Jessica said, "So tell us about yourselves."  The two women looked at each other. 

"You tell them," Snow White said.

"Okay.  Well, obviously we are sisters.  We are the daughters of a poor widow.  Because it was just the three of us, we were a very close family.  We did everything for our mother, and we would not take back one minute of it," Red Rose began.

"Hold on! Are you both princesses?" Kathy asked.

Everyone looked at her like they could not believe that she would ask a question like that.

"What?  It's not like we haven't seen a couple lately," Kathy said.

"As a matter of fact, we just became princesses," Red Rose said.

"You have to tell us all about it," said Kathy.

Apparently everyone else in the salon agreed, because they turned their attention to the two women.

"It all started one night when mother was reading us a tale before bed.  All of a sudden, there was a loud pounding on the door.  I opened the door thinking it was a neighbor, but to my surprise it was a bear," Red Rose said.

"How terrifying!" Jessica said.

"Yes, we were all horrified.  He told us he would not harm us.  It's just that he was freezing, and needed a place to keep warm.  Our mother told us not to be afraid, because he was telling the truth.  We helped him to get dried off, and then we all went to bed.  The next day Snow White and I let him out.  Then, he returned to our home every night after.  He came to be a good family friend," Red Rose continued.

"Ahh..."the audience responded.

"Yes, and then the bear broke Snow White's heart," Red Rose said.

"He did not, Rose," Snow White chimed in.

"He told us he was going to be gone all winter.  It did make her very sad, but we knew we'd see him again someday," said Red Rose.

"How long was it until you saw him again?" Lora asked.

Snow White said, "I guess I'll continue from here.  One day our mother asked us to go out, and get some sticks.  We did as we were told and while we were out we noticed a dwarf who had his face half stuck in a tree.  He screamed at us to help him, but we didn't know what to do.  We told him that we would go get help, and he cursed us under his breath.  Before we left, Red Rose cut off his beard to see if that would free him up any.  It did.  He grabbed a bag of gold that he had been reaching for up in the tree, and ran off."

"Scoundrel!" said Kathy.

"Yes, he really is.  Then, later that day, Red Rose and I were trying to catch some fish for dinner that night and we saw him again.  We tried to catch him, but he disappeared out of our reach.  A couple days later our mother sent us on another errand, and we ran into the dwarf again.  This time he was being attacked by a bird, and we knew no better than to help him.  After we helped him, he scurried away, without thanking us, into his home under fthe rocks.  On our way back home, we noticed he had not closed the entrance to his cave, and so we peeked in.  This angered him greatly, but all of a sudden there was a loud bear screech.  Then, we saw a huge black bear running towards us," said Snow White.

"Uh-oh!" said Jessica.

"Yes!  Even worse: the dwarf sacrificed us.  He told the bear to eat Red Rose and me in order to save himself.  We started running and then the bear called our names.  I turned, recognizing his voice.  I ran towards him.  As I neared him, his bear skin fell off and, by the time I reached him, a beautiful man stood beside me.  He told me he was a prince who had been cursed by that evil dwarf.  He was cursed to roam as a bear until he found someone who could love him.  I loved him, and so now the dwarf is the one that is cursed.  He and I soon married.  Then, Red Rose married his brother.  We divided the treasure of the dwarves and our mother still lives with us.  However, now we have people who help us do some of the work.  That is why we decided to come and get out nails done," Snow White concluded.

Everyone came back to reality.  It didn't seem anyone could believe that Snow White had fallen in love with a bear.

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Snow White and Red Rose


Author's Note:  I retold the story of Snow-White and Red-Rose from Andrew Lang's Blue Fair Book.  I kept a lot of the story the same.  I did have to cut out some of the details in order to make the story shorter.  I still had the story set in the salon, and so that changed how the story was told.  I had the two sisters both tell part of the story, because I thought it would be nice to develop both of their characters while they were in the salon.  I did not go in to as much detail about how close they were to their mother, but I tried to make it clear that the three of them were very close.  I had the bear go away in the winter instead of the spring, just because I wanted to.  Then, I really had to shorten the interaction between the dwarfs and the girls.  However, I think that I got his character developed decently enough.  I tried to keep my retelling similar to the original story, but I threw in some new details.  I also left some old details out.  I hope that my reader is able to enjoy this version of the story, and I hope that I did a descent job retelling it.

Bibliography: Lang, Andrew. "Snow-White and Red-Rose." The Blue Fairy Book, 1889.
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