The Day I Became Rama

Child of mine, I begin.  I am Vishnu the great.  These other gods came to me to ask me to do them a favor.  They asked me to take care of the problem they had created.  I think how I should explain the reason I want to do a favor for these other gods.  I am one of the most powerful, influential, and the most respected of all.  I have always been loyal to those who are loyal to me.  I am one the most revered gods.  There are more who to me more than any other because of my loyalty and kindness.  It’s because of this that the other gods asked me to rid the world of Ravana, the ten-headed demon king.  All of the gods and mortals know my character and that is why they know that I would not turn them down and it is because of this they came to me. 

Ravana’s hatred, greed, and anger will be his downfall.  Ravana will never know why or what hit him until it is too late.  Ravana has been such an angry king.  He has also been a very smart and manipulative king.  Ravana the great demon king tricked the gods into a deal where no god was able to kill Ravana.  Ravana was only able to be killed by a man.

I am proud to be revered by so many as such an honored god.  I am proud to be the preserver of the world.  My entire purpose has been to keep the world free from the harm of demons.  I will gladly honor the request that has been asked of me.  That demon king, who does he think he is to treat the people and the gods the way he does?  I will honor the respect of the other gods and I will seal Ravana’s fate. 

I am the child of the great King Dasaratha.  I took the form of a mortal, a human, a man.  I became Rama.  I will not tell you of my entire life as Rama.  We do not have time for my entire tale.  I will tell you of the important events in my life as Rama. 

Child of mine, Ravana decided that he wanted Sita as his wife.  While Ravana thought that Sita would easily be attracted to him and leave me as Rama, Ravana was sadly mistaken.  I tell you that Ravana’s revenge and hatred runs deep.  Ravana sought revenge on me because Sita rejected him. 

Ravana tried to kill me so that he could take Sita.  While he was wrong to think this would work, what he did not understand was that I had been asked to kill him.  I tracked Ravana and I vowed to take him to his death.  I decided that I must teach Ravana a lesson since he was unable to learn from his own mistakes.  It was with this that my quest continued to a deeper more personal level than before.

Ravana had several commanders who tried to fight and kill me.  They were coming from every direction, from the left, right, in front of me, behind me, hiding around every corner.  It was crazy.  There were so many of them with what seemed like a million weapons.  I ducked, I turned, I jumped, I ran, I hid, I fell to the ground, but nothing worked.  I could not hide from the commanders.  I did not want to hurt the commanders; I simply wanted to kill Ravana.  I decided that if this was the way Ravana was going to battle then it was to be.  I must fight all who were in the way.  So, fight is what I did.  I took my energy, I took your mother’s revenge and I fought.  Before I knew it, I had killed thousands of Ravana’s soldiers.

I then started in on Ravana.  I began by taking his weapons and destroying his chariot.  I finally was able to get Ravana into a battle for the ages.  I was injured and he was injured.  Both of our injuries were bad, but I did not know if I was going to make it.  It was then that the realization hit me that I would kill Ravana.  My decision became how important it was for me to live or die.  I decided I would live.  I turned.  I saw Ravana.  I was more determined and unwavering in my quest to conquer him.  At that moment, Ravana ran toward me.  I was able to turn and at that very moment it seemed as everything slowed down just for a second.  I then swung and decapitated Ravana.  It was not just one of the ten heads that I struck.  I had cut off the most vital head of the demon king.  Ravana’s central head was gone and with that I knew Ravana was dead.  I was wrong, Ravana was not dead.  He grew another head.  I cut off another.  Ravana grew another head.  Nothing made sense.  I pulled out another arrow from my satchel.  I pulled the one weapon I had been saving for a special purpose.  This was greater than any arrow in the world.  This arrow is one of the most powerful in existence.  This arrow was made by the great Brahma.  I pulled back on my bow.  I told myself to concentrate, focus, and aim.  So, I checked my aim, closed my eyes, prayed and shot.  I opened my eyes slowly; I looked up and saw Ravana.  I saw Ravana lying on the ground, the dust still falling to the earth to rest.  I was not sure what had happened.  Ravana still had all ten heads, yet Ravana was not moving.  I checked again.  The arrow was in Ravana’s stomach area.  The demon king, Ravana, was dead.  Never to be heard from again.


Rama conquers Ravana
Rama conquering Ravana
Source: The Perfection of Rama by Joshua Harlan

Author’s Note:  

I chose to write the story of Rama defeating Ravana as my first story.  I wrote this story in the same concept as a father telling his child a story.  I made mention of Sita to allow the reader to an insight into the world.  I wanted to make the reader want to read the second story. 

I wrote the beginning with Vishnu as the speaker.  I did this so Vishnu could describe the idea of his greatness, importance, significance, and confidence.  I wanted Vishnu to be the speaker so that Vishnu’s confidence that he would kill Ravana was clear no matter what occurred. 

I also wanted Vishnu to be the one who said that he would be born as the son of Dasaratha to give a little background on Rama without having to go into a lot of detail.  By placing Vishnu as the speaker at the beginning of story it gives the reader a clearer idea that a child is hearing a “glory day” story from a dad. 

In addition I felt it was important to open up a point to talk about Ravana and how Ravana treated people.  This also opened the story so that Ravana’s traits and characteristics could be described to the reader.


Bibliography

Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.

Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic.



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