Sun Story Two: The Green Mountain Saviour
       
        The time had come for the Sun to tell its last story to the Moon. The Sun chose to tell this particular story because the original storyteller went through a transformation that the Sun could not resist telling the Moon. Evil had entered the Green Mountain's life and when his well-being was in danger he became a new mountain.


                              The Green Mountain


        I live a peaceful existence on the land. Things for me changed when I happened to meet a man- well, he was a boy when we met- named Ian. I had never met such a respectable human. Ian and I became close friends and I enjoyed watching him grow up and wished nothing but the best for him and his family. Ian had an unkind father, though ,and this man made a deal with a magical old gentleman. The deal stipulated that Ian was to be given to the old man in return for a magical cloth. I was upset with the father for giving his son away but my ire subsided since I knew the old man because he lived in one of my caves. Ian spent seven years with the old man who taught him important things about respecting nature and treating living things with courtesy and love. Ian was an excellent pupil and had already had experience with such lessons since he befriended me. The old man told me one day that he was training Ian because he sensed something evil was on the land and he wanted to create someone good of heart to stop it.

        The evil happened to be the king that ruled the land. He lived in the largest castle and tore down and wasted the land and trees to build such a structure. The old man sent Ian to meet giants, fishes and other elements of nature that when asked for help would easily come to his aid. I became involved in this scheme when the old man informed me that I had one of the largest roles to play in saving the land from more destruction by the king. The final journey that the old man sent Ian on was to get a job at the evil king's castle. This was done easily and Ian began his new task as a scribe.
The Fish King
      
          Ian was the best scribe there and it sparked jealousy amongst the other scribes. They told the king he was using magic and the king demanded that Ian tell him where he learned the magic. Ian told the king of his education from the old man. The king decided to put Ian to a few tests so he could rid his kingdom of such powerful magic by luring the old man out and getting rid of him. Ian's first task was to kidnap a princess who lived in a bronze castle and bring her to the king so he could wed her. Ian wept because if he did not complete the task he would be executed. Sensing Ian's anguish, the old man appeared; Ian related his dilemma and the old man produced a ship for Ian to lure the princess out of her castle and bring her to the evil king. Ian was successful in convincing the princess to come out of the castle and out onto the boat. Ian related why he had wanted her to come onto the boat and she threw the keys to the castle into the ocean in her despair. The king was happy to see his future bride but upset that Ian accomplished the task. So, the king issued another task to Ian upon pain of death if it was not carried out.
       
        The second task involved the princess's happiness. She wanted to have her castle moved next to the evil king's before she agreed to wed him. Ian was given this impossible task and while Ian wept about it the evil king started to clear more land for the arrival of the new castle. The king came dangerously close to my mountain and I had heard plans of him wanting to chip into me to build a stone bridge. The evilness of the king had come too far. First, he was trying to kill Ian and destroy the old man and now he wanted to destroy me. The king wanted Ian to fail but knew that the magical old man would help him. What the king didn't know was that everything that he was destroying for his pleasure had a soul and a voice and would prove to be more harmful than the old man.

        Ian once again accomplished the task, this time with the help of one of his friend giants. The king was livid and so set up a trap to finally rid himself of Ian and magic. Ian was given another task: finding the keys that the princess threw in the ocean. Ian called upon his fish friend to find them. The king, meanwhile, decided that as soon as Ian returned with the keys he was going to kill him and wait for the old man to appear so he could kill him too. In one fell swoop the king thought he could be rid of Ian and magic while still marrying the princess.

        The old man came to me and told me to round up all the loose rocks that peppered my cliffs. The old man cautioned Ian to be leery of the king and not to follow him anywhere alone. Ian entered the castle to return the keys to the princess when the king led Ian outside to show him his new demolition plans. The king secretly held a knife in his cloak and when he pulled it out, the plants wound their stems around his feet and hurled him to the ground. When he was secured to the ground I began to pelt him with the loose rocks. The king suffered greatly from broken bones and I ended the evil with a final blow to his skull. I changed my peaceful ways just once to secure the health of the land. 


Author's Note : 
        This story was incredibly long and detailed.  I changed almost everything in it. I created the mountain character and developed the king into something evil although he barely had a role in the original. The story originally dealt with Ian becoming something great and doing the king's task and eventually earning the kingdom and the princess for himself. The king did not assign the tasks out of malice, it was only because he wanted the princess and Ian could do it for him. Nature did not have a role at all in it except for the beautiful descriptions that the author provided such as "the sparkling brine-spray through the air in bright sunshine." The details were exquisite but given no character. I made what was the backdrop the focus of my story. I think it was important to show that the greed of humans has a large effect on the life of Nature.                                                                                                           
  
Questions? Comments? Concerns? E-mail me: Hiker of large mountains----- Amber Sears

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Image Information:
           Top:  Ben Ledi in Trossachs Mountain Range, Scotland
                     Photograph taken by Casey Smith, 2005.  Weblink.

            Bottom:  "A small cod resting at night", Scotland Underwater
                              Photograph taken by Alex Scott and Alison Fleming
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   Bibliography Information:                                                    
               Title: The Land of Green Mountains
                    Author: Donald Alexander MacKenzie
                    Book and Year: Wonder Tales from Scottish Myth and Legend. 1917
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