Act!

Rainy Street

The rain made you feel tired. Remind the rain you are alive.




Guy sat on the bench outside of the barbershop on the south side of town. He looked peaceful. The sort of peace that is so hard for a man to find, and hold onto. A young woman was walking by the shop, and Guy decided to say hello to her because he liked her.

    “Hello, Evelyn!” Guy said enthusiastically.
    Evelyn turned and gave him a beautiful smile, beautiful and weak. It was obvious that she was trying to appear fine when she was not.
    “Why don’t you sit with me for a while?” Guy called as she started past him.
    “Oh I couldn't. My sister is watching the children for a moment and I don’t have much time to get down to the store, and I…” she looked around for support from someone that was not there.
    “Ah, come sit for a moment and tell me how the children are,” Guy said sliding to one side of the bench.
    Evelyn found herself compelled to sit with him. And she was so tired. The two looked like an odd pair on the bench just then. One was a woman who looked like she had reached her limit of exhaustion. The other was a man who looked as if he had never been tired or furrowed his brow in angst.
    “The children are doing well, Guy, Olivia has begun to speak. And Abby is starting to learn to read,” she tried to sound energetic.
    “It looks as if it might rain,” Guy said to her.
    Evelyn looked up at the sky quizzically, and said, “Yes, I suppose it does.”
    “Do you remember the story of Rama and Sita I told you about?” Guy asked.
    Evelyn rolled her eyes. “Yes, I remember. It was a beautiful story, Guy, but I really must get going.”

Guy began before she could even leave. And he wrapped her up in his peaceful voice and powerful words,

“The rainy season washed over the world after Sita was stolen from Rama. Rama could not go looking for his beautiful wife. And as the rain washed over the world, Rama was left with nothing but his own thoughts and fears. It is a dangerous thing to be left with just oneself. And Rama felt so alone. He thought the rain would wash away the trail that led to his beloved. He feared he could not defeat the powerful demons who had stole his darling. And his brother, Lakshmana, sensed it was the critical time to comfort his brother, lest all hope be lost. And so Lakshmana sat with him one day, stopping him from all the things he did to keep himself busy. And he said to him, ‘Brother why are you so low? Do you fear that we will never find Sita? Or do you fear that you will not be able to conquer the demons who have stole her? Take comfort, because all of our friends will help us and we will find her again.’ But Lakshmana could see this was not enough for Rama, because Rama knew the facts. No, it was Rama’s spirit that was being soaked by the rain.  And so Lakshmana looked at him and spoke honestly. ‘Brother, you are Rama, the lord of earth. You are a great warrior and you love your wife purely and truly. You cannot sit here and let your mind become weak with fear and contemplation. Instead, know that you will achieve. Prepare yourself to act! Your strength alone will carry you through the longest of nights and you will shine bright in every day! Rama is not a man of heavy thought and worry. He is a man of righteous action and positive reflection!’ Lakshmana’s words rang true in Rama’s heart. And he preserved through the rainy season and fought for his love.”

    Evelyn sat there quietly smiling at Guy. She slowly rose from her seat and touched his face.
    “Thank you, Guy.”
    Guy looked at her with his eyebrows raised, “For what, beautiful mother?”
    “For telling a tired woman exactly what she needed to hear.”
    Evelyn strolled away with a smile on her face that she was not forcing.




Authors note: I retold this story with a lot of freedom. It is not an exact retelling of either version of the Ramayana that we read. But it was one of my favorite parts in both books. In Narayan’s version Lakshmana was simply comforting. In Buck’s version, many of Rama’s friends criticized him for getting down and commanded him to find his warrior spirit again. I loved this moment because it focused on such a positive attitude. This was a lesson in life urguing us to ignore the negative possibilities or bad facts and move forward. I thought it was a powerful moment in Rama’s life. He never lost sight of his mission again. And for a man who was supposed to lead the world, he had to never waiver in order to bring peace to everyone. I choose to not create too much development on the character Evelyn or her response to the story because I wanted the reader to imagine her situation. Sometimes the greatest empathy we can feel is when we imagine the circumstances of the character ourselves. It is clear that she is hurt and tired. And it is clear the kind words of the guru are what she needed to hear so that she can not focus on the rain and know that she is capable of overcoming all the problems placed before her.

Image Information: This image was taken from a website with a montage of beautiful street photos. I liked the way it looked. The pictures were taken in Tehran.

Bibliography: This story was taken from the Indian epic, The Ramayana.

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