Clear and Precise Wording

The following excerpt is from an essay that attempts to convince the reader of the importance of teaching morals in high school.

·        What seems to be the major problem in this paragraph?

Moral Education in the Curriculum

Democracy is a good element within society because it gives us life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness—very decent rights given by the Declaration of Independence.  Democratic societies such as ours are based on pleasant morals and we must perpetuate and help out the practice of such good morals by exhibiting some good stuff of what we have to offer in American values in our everyday lives.  A possible way to achieve this goal is to integrate moral education into the public school system.  By educating our youth in the morals that are here in this country, we can make our society satisfactory by having lovely morals taught as part of the required curriculum.