The floor was open one last time, and there was one person left to tell their story.  

    "Hey everybody, I guess it's my turn now," David said with his eyes glued to the ground.  "All of your stories have been great and it has been really exciting hearing about all of them, but my story will definitely leave you speechless.  I am not sure how to go about telling my story, but I will try my best.   Most of you did not come upon the ghost who you encountered on purpose, but I, on the other hand, enticed this incident.   I was at a sleepover with about five of my buddies from school and it was right around Halloween time, maybe a week before.  The sleepover itself was meant to be fun and scary, but what we decided to do will haunt me forever.
    "We met up at my house around seven o'clock that evening so that it was already dark outside.  One of the kids there decided to go play the 'Hail Mary' game in the bathroom.  Half of us had no idea what he was talking about.  We followed him into the bathroom where our game would take place.  He explained that the game would consist of us turning off the lights and facing the mirror, while one volunteer would chant 'Hail Mary' seven times with each time getting louder until it was almost at a full scream.  I volunteered and I regret it very much.  He guided me to face the mirror because the lights were already off.  I hesitated but I was trying hard not to tremble in front of my friends.   Part of the rules also stated that I had to spin around in a circle while chanting so that I would see the mirror once every spin.  I began the chant.
   
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    "Each time I spun around it seemed as if the mirror would get lighter but everything else remained black as night.  By the fifth or sixth spin, the mirror had blackened again and I began to notice something appearing in the mirror.  I was getting dizzy so I thought it was just something I imagined.  On the last spin I saw two red eyes in the mirror, but they were about seven feet above the ground!  I immediately let out a scream of horror and the rest of the group ran out of the bathroom as fast as they could.  I was the last to get out, and when I reached the light of the bedroom all of my friends stared at me in disbelief.  I asked them what they were looking at but none of them could answer, only point.  They were pointing toward my hands.  I looked down and noticed that my hands were covered in what looked like blood!  The whole group stared at me without saying a word for what felt like an eternity.  We all started to scream at the same time and ran out of the room while I was trying to wipe the blood off my hands.  We reached the front yard, but when we got there we all turned around to notice that all of the lights in the house that had once been turned on had turned black.  As scared as we were at that moment, we turned around without thinking and started for someone else's house! 
     "We got to Jimmy's house safely.  At that point we didn't know what to think.  We sat down on Jimmy's couch and stared at one another.  We played the staring game for about half an hour before we decided to play video games to take our mind off of the incident.  Everyone else seemed to forget about it...except me.  I have not been able to get this out of my mind since it happened."

    Dr. Kriegel noticed that David was finished.  "So all of you have told your stories, and now it is time for me to tell my own."  He sat his clipboard down and stood up. 
   
    "I have something to tell all of you, and it may come as a bit of a surprise.  I am actually the answer to all of your problems.  I am not only a counselor...I am a ghost.  I died fifteen years ago and I have not been able to give up my profession because I loved it so much."  He hesitated and began to float off the ground!  "I do not want to frighten any of you, but I had to tell you soon.  Since I have been dead I have been able to learn from the living in many ways.   I learned a lot from you guys while you were telling me your stories.  I actually know all of the ghosts you told stories about, and I will tell you up front that they mean you no harm.  I was there in the woods with the hitchhiker, I was there with the children when they were killed by the train, I was in the Toys 'R' Us and I was also at your house, David.  I do not want any of you to be scared...I only want to learn  what I can from those that are still living, and I will also begin to share what I have learned with other ghosts as well."



Author's note:  I took the original urban legend of "Bloody Mary" and turned it into "Hail Mary."  The kids in my story experienced it up close and personal and will never forget it.  The horror of this story is the blood that appears on David's hands, but it is never explained how it got there.  The original urban legend has many different versions of the story, but I chose the one that requires you to spin around in a circle and then ever so slightly the ghost appears in the mirror when you face it!  This legend has had many people scared for some time, and a lot of people refuse to go after it.  Dr. Kriegel did in fact turn out to be a ghost himself.  Not only was he a ghost, but he was actually present during all of the kids' experiences!


Image Information:  Bloody Mary

Bibliography:  "Bloody Mary" Snopes.com: Rumor has it.


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