Ravana kept to
his word and the truce went unbroken. We rose
early the next morning, before even the rising of the sun. We prepared
for war.
I claimed a new tree from the shores of Lanka for my weapon and took my
place
among the honor guard for Rama. We stood resolute and ready for
anything as the
sun crept over the horizon. Morning brought a glorious sight of the
city. I
must admit that there are few sights are more awe-inspiring than seeing
the sun
rise over that demon city.
As the sun rose
toward
The day wore on and we inflicted massive casualties on the demons. As the sun sank down past the horizon and the moon rose up above, the demons retreated back into their city. We chased them to the gate and pounded upon the massive timbers until Rama called us back to our camp. We hadn’t even crossed half of the field when Ravana appeared on the city walls.
Rama ordered us
all to make camp and watch the wall. I
directed the others and before long we had the entire camp made. A pair
of
braziers had been set on Lanka’s wall and they clearly illuminated
Ravana as he
danced and sang. He sang in a demonic tongue that sounded glorious and
mighty.
His dance glorified all of his warlike nature. He juggled fire with his
twenty
hands. He swept through the air in a show of martial prowess. In time
he
finished his dance and song and departed the wall.
“Gather near!” Rama called his honor guard close to him. “Ravana has sung a song of battle and has, by doing so, directly challenged me to personal combat. This is the end of the war. I kindly thank you all for your aid, and ask that none of you interfere in any way. You see, everyone has their time. The time now is for Ravana to fall.”
There were many grunts and howls among the honor guard. My voice was among those touting the glory of Rama. He graced us all with a smile.
“The fastest of you must spread the word among the rest of the animal army,” he said.
Those with the fleetest of feet rushed away from him to spread the word. Rama took his time preparing himself for battle. He stripped off his armor and prayed quietly by himself. When he returned he washed his hair and dressed in his fine garments of battle. He was taking up his bow when a chariot descended from the sky.
“Rama, I have heard that you’re in need of a chariot and charioteer,” Matali the charioteer shouted as he landed near Rama. “I am Matali and this is chariot is a gift to aid you in battle against Ravana from Indra!”
Rama walked forward and bowed before the glorious charioteer. We gave a loud cheer of approval.
“Thank
you,
good Matali,” Rama said with a glorious smile.
He climbed up into the chariot with Matali. “We will ride forth in
glory and
fame shall be ours. Ravana will fall this night!”
Matali snapped the reins over the pair of divine horses before the chariot and the chariot lurched away from us. Meanwhile, Ravana’s chariot rolled out through the gates. He drove his chariot with half of his hands while the other half managed implements of war. The chariots took off to the sky. We of the animal army watched in awe as Ravana shot a thousand arrows toward Rama.
Rama valiantly shot down each arrow with the precision of the gods. When Ravana launched unholy astras in blazing colors of saffron, each marked with impurity. Rama countered each with an astra of his own. Blue bolts flared across the sky from Rama’s chariot and struck down each of Ravana’s saffron bolts. Rama’s chariot faltered, ever so slightly once.
In time
Ravana’s heads and arms began to fall from the sky.
Bits of bow eventually joined the severed limbs and heads littering the
ground.
In a flare of blue and green light, Ravana’s chariot tumbled from the
sky and
smashed into the ground. Matali landed Rama nearby and Rama disembarked.
Ravana climbed from the wreckage of his smashed chariot. His ten heads scowled and shouted curses at Rama. His twenty hands each carried a massive mace. Rama calmly walked toward Ravana. He drew a long arrow from his quiver and chanted a mantra as he nocked the arrow in the string of his bow. As he drew the string back to his ear, the arrow transformed from common wood, metal, and feather to a glorious swirling bolt of blue and gold. Rama released the arrow and it sped across the battlefield, illuminating the ground as it soared.
Ravana moved his maces to intercept the holy bolt. He wasn’t slow and got all twenty maces in the way. However, the astra Rama had chosen for this final arrow was one of endings. The blue and gold bolt smashed through all twenty maces, and right through Ravana’s heart and out the other side.
Ravana
stood
bewildered for a moment. He then took two
staggering steps toward Rama and fell, face first, into the dust. A
chorus of
cheers went up from the animal army. Rama raised his hand and we all
fell
silent.
And so ended
the war. Sita was returned to Rama and the
horrible demon king Ravana was laid to rest.
Author’s Note: In my last author’s note I commented on how some things can veer way off course in terms of where an author originally intends to take a work. For this story, the exact opposite happened. I wrote out a rough outline for the story and nailed every major point as I went along. It feels really nice when things work out just as one plans them to.
I chose to mix the two versions of the Ramayana, using the killing blow from Buck’s version and the aerial astra combat from Narayan’s. I also put thought into the colors that manifested when Rama and Ravana fired their astras at one another. Saffron is usually a color that depicts the battle color. It is a color of warriors and the quest for light. Blue is a royal and noble color. It represents the ability to overcome difficult times. Gold is majestic. In many different mythologies, gold is worn by the divine as armor and it is considered an invincible metal. By having Ravana’s astras erupt in a saffron color, I felt that I was giving him the path back to the light in his final combat with Rama. It hints at his true character that was explained in the note he left for Rama in Buck’s version. He is noble and honorable and has accepted his fate. Rama’s blue astras signify his noble and honorable capabilities. It reflects his stability and his devotion to defeating evil.
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