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The Young King
...as told by the king to his daughter the witch, who told it to her daughter who tells it to her son the Star-Child, who told it to his daughter, who told it to her daughter the Spanish Princess, who told it to her granddaughter, who is telling it to her son Cyril...


    After growing up the son of a sheepherder and peasant, at the age of sixteen I was suddenly swept away one day to the palace of the king. They told me I was the long-lost grandson of the king, who had just died. I was immediately put in place as the new king, and my coronation would take place in a few weeks.

    Over those weeks I was introduced to life as royalty. I was taught to read, write, ride a horse, fight with a sword, eat at a banquet. I was given many beautiful clothes and possessions. These things began to consume me. I worshiped the beauty of a painting, or a set of jewels. I loved to put on the expensive, rich clothes. I ordered jewels and fine things to be brought to the palace. For my coronation, I had a special robe woven of the finest gold tissue, and embroidered with gold thread and tiny jewels. I had a scepter studded with pearls and a crown covered thickly with precious stones. I loved these things and eagerly awaited the day of my coronation, when I could stand in front of my people wearing these beautiful things.

    Finally the night before my coronation day came, and I went to bed filled with excitement. When I fell asleep, though, I was troubled by many disturbing dreams.

    First I dreamt that I was in a tiny room overcrowded with people huddled over work tables. They were all feverishly spinning and weaving beautiful fabrics. The room was dark, foul-smelling, and insufferably hot. As I looked closer, I saw that the workers were small children and old people. Their life was wasting away before my eyes. I spoke to one of them and he said that the only way they could make enough pennies to buy bread was to work in this room, spinning and weaving fabrics for royalty. I asked him what he was making, and he showed me the beautiful robe of gold tissue that he was weaving for the king's coronation day.

    I woke up with a start. That man was suffering in that tiny room at my orders. After falling back into fitful sleep, I dreamt again
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    This time I found myself on a small ship out on the water. It was being rowed by a dozen slaves, all gaunt and
sick-looking. As I watched, one of the slaves came forward and prepared to dive underwater. When he came back to the surface, after some time, he had one pearl in his hand. He dove back into the deep over and over, each time bringing a pearl which his master would examine greedily. Finally, the slave took especially long to come back up. He was dragged onto the ship and he lay on the deck, bleeding out of his ears and nose. He gasped for air a few times then died. In his hands was the largest pearl yet. The body was thrown overboard while the master examined the last pearl. It was just the thing, he said, for the top of the king's new scepter.

    Again I awoke at the realization that this pearl, and this man's life, was for me.

    I dreamt again and found myself at a dry riverbed. The hot sun beat down on the backs of dozens of men, covered in dust, plagued by insects, working to dig precious stones out of the unyielding earth. I wept at the sight of the suffering men, and cried aloud, What are they doing? What is this for? But even as I cried out, I wept because I knew the answer. These men were toiling in the sun to find the precious gems I had ordered for my coronation crown. As this realization hit me, I awoke.
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    It was the day of my coronation. My servants came into my chambers, carrying my robe of tissued gold, my scepter with pearls and my crown, heavy with jewels. The sight of them made me ill as I recalled how this finery had been obtained.

    To the surprise of the men, I refused to put the things on. They protested that I would not be recognized as king without my fine crown. Ignoring them, I found my old cloak that I had worn while herding sheep, picked up my crooked staff, twisted a crown of thistles for my head, and went forth.


    As I walked through the streets, men by turns mocked me and tried to convince me to return to my finery. By the time I reached the church, a
crowd had gathered. I stood on the steps, and explained why I would not wear those things. As I spoke, light streamed down from heaven through the stained glass windows. As it fell upon me, the sun wove a robe around me far more beautiful than the tissued gold. The staff I was holding blossomed white lilies far surpassing my pearls in their beauty, and the thistles on my head blossomed blood-red roses far superior to the rubies I had ordered for myself. I stood, adorned as a king by the sunlight and God himself, and my people fell on their knees in awe.

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"And there you have it, Cyril," his mother concluded. "That is the story of the cloak you are holding right now. That king passed his unworn cloak on to his granddaughter the witch, and you know what happened after that. That is the history I have never told you. It is a sad and dangerous story, which is why I kept it locked in the trunk. But now I have told you and you must decide what you will do with this knowledge, and with this cloak. Because now it is yours."


    Cyril sat and stared at the cloak in his lap, recalling all the pain and suffering that had surrounded it for so many years. He wondered what would happen to him if he chose to wear it...




Author's Note:
I didn't change the plot of this story as much as I changed the other ones. But I did change the point of view to make it from the king's perspective, and I added a lot of his feelings in to make the story more emotional and to make the king easier to relate to. In the original there is a lot more description of how the king, after coming to the palace, fell in love with beauty and fine things and would worship and desire those things. There is also a lot more description and detail to his dreams. The third one I changed some because the king stood alongside Death and Avarice as they argued over the souls of the men who were working in the riverbed. Also there was a man dressed as a pilgrim who revealed to the king that his dreams were about himself. In my version the king figures it out on his own. Also in the other version, there is more debate about the king renouncing his finery, including people telling him that the workers who make the fabric and find the jewels would have no way to earn their bread if they did not work for him, even though their working conditions are bad. I left all of that out.

Bibliography: "The Young King," by Oscar Wilde. From The House of Pomegranates, 1891. web source: SurLaLane Fairy Tales.

Image: The Young King. web source: ArtsyCraftsy.

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