"A Storm Rising: Day Three" an original frametale by Michelle Wilson
"Dead Man's Cave"




    The travelers awoke to overcast skies accented by an oppressive mugginess that made it difficult to breath. After breakfast, Danny and Natasha wandered off to see some pictographs that Natasha had spotted beneath a rock overhang while Meeca gathered her gear. Sedona glancing around saw her opportunity and called Christian and Jeb aside.
   "I didn't want to say anything until I was sure, but yesterday I took the map the mummy was clutching..."
   "You stole a map off a dead man?" Christian interrupted, incredulous.
   "He didn't need it any more," Sedona replied flippantly. "Anyway, when I got a chance to look at it; it definitely looks like a map to our chimney mine. Its somewhere near this old mission marked here. Do you know this place, Jeb?"
   "Well...I've got a good idea where this is. I kin get us there today if its where I'ma thinkin'. I reckon we can use a shortcut I know."
   "Excellent, but do me a favor, don't say anything to Natasha and Danny. It will just upset them! Let them think we just found it."
   "You're right about that," Christian said running his hand through his hair. "At least we're making progress."
   "Hey guys! Look at this," called Natasha.
Everyone went to join her and Danny. There etched on the wall was a strange pictograph. In the center was a large figure with curving arms. It seemed to be gathering in the smaller people.
   "I've never seen a pictograph like this. I wonder what it represents?" asked Natasha.
   "Maybe its a shaman or chief in the center," offered Christian.
   "Maybe, its unusual. I'm going to take a picture. Someone at the University may recognize it," replied a preoccupied Natasha.

 

 The party talked Meeca into traveling with them. After everyone was ready they started out. After an hour they reached Jeb's shortcut. They entered into an almost invisible slit in a rock wall. Once inside they were amazed to find a winding slot canyon with walls reaching upward of a hundred feet.

    "This is awesome," said Christian, "The tops of these types of canyons are usually only a crevice about a foot or two across. That is why it's dim in here. I've always wanted to see one!"
    "I wonder how they are formed?" mused Danny.
    "The geology instructor said they are formed by flooding and the water rushing through the sandstone. He didn't adequately describe the beauty and incandescence of these striations, or the colors!" replied Sedona amazed.
    As they wound through the canyon, an occasional shaft of light would pierce through the clouds above and bounce off the walls causing a light show.
    "I know this is not a cave, but it reminds me of a story I heard recently," said Christian whimsically.
    "Tell us," The others said in chorus.
    "Well, it was in Colorado in the winter of 1880. Three prospectors were working a couple of miles north of what came to be called Dead Man Camp. A blizzard came out of nowhere. They had to find shelter quick. They saw a small opening in a rock wall across the canyon. They entered and lighted crude torches. They found a narrow passageway not four feet high. They followed it and came to a twenty-foot- long room and inside were five skeletons! There were also several more passages shooting off the room into the gloom. They randomly picked one. It led deeper into the mountain and then into another chamber. There were shelves carved into the stone walls. Stacked on the shelves were what looked like stones but were actually rough gold bars! They picked up five bars and after the storm passed headed back to Wet Mountain Valley to have their gold appraised. Each bar was worth $900 each. Everyone wanted to know where they found it, but , they kept their mouths shut. They planned to go back in spring, sure they could find the cave again. They were wrong. The Fairplay Plume and the Denver Post both reported this story later. To this day, no one has found it."
   "That was a good story, son," said Jeb, "but I think we better put a move on it. By my stars and socks, I feel a storm brewing. My bones ache! We don't want to be in here when the rain starts. These canyons can flood quicker than a junebug on a flea."


   Taking Jeb's words to heart, they quickened their pace. Within twenty minutes they cleared the exit. Just in time too! The sky had turned an ominous green and purple. Lightening cut the sky in jagged arcs. Energy crackled in the air. The rain was picking up in ferocity. It was very unlike the storms in the city.
    "Look, there's the mission. Let's make a run for it," shouted Sedona over rumbling thunder.
Everyone hunkered down and ran as fast as they could until they made it within the mission's decaying walls filled with dust and shadows. Meeca seemed very uncomfortable and Danny asked if she was alright.
    "This reminds me of bad times long ago," she said shivering and pale.
    "Its just a building," Danny said comfortingly. Suddenly, a scream broke the darkness!
    "What is it, Natasha!" asked Sedona, running to her side.
    "I saw someone back there! A robed figure, but it's gone now!" cried Natasha.
    "It's just your imagination," said Christian skeptically.
    "Then I guess we have the same imagination; I saw it too and it gave me the creeps," said Danny.
    Wondering, they stared down the hallway into the darkness.....




Author's note: Wow, only one more story left! What is going to happen? You have to keep reading to find out the exciting ending. I chose this story from Colorado because it had a cave, winding passages, skeletons lurking and gold! Would you take strangers into your party? Will our travelers be proven wise or naive? Only time and the whim of the writer (me!)will tell.

Images found at:
Pictograph
Slot canyon
Desert Storm
Robed figure

Bibliography:
Dead Man's Cave
found at: Legends of America.com, A Travel Site for the Nostalgic and Historic Minded.
Author unknown.

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